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sex by ~theworldisaprison:icontheworldisaprison:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Erotic > Open


i will penetrate you
desecrate you
mediate you
tie you down
bind your arms together
then tie them to the bed
spread your legs
now, i look at you
sprawled out on the bed
both of us enjoying every second of it
now, i penetrate you
watching your face
your jaw drop
your eyes go half closed
listening to your moans
feeling your nails
digging into my back
peeling my skin away
feeling your teeth
piercing my skin
like dull needles
one at at ime
slowly breaking the skin
you taste my blood
taste quite good
the final thrust
brightens your face
with a lovely smile
that lets me know
i've done good
©2004-2009 ~theworldisaprison
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Author's Comments

me and my gf was writing sex poems back and forth in school. quite interesting to read while sitting in algebra.

Comments


:iconthomismyart:
~thomismyart Dec 8, 2005, 7:46:09 PM
nice...

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R-A-D-I-O-H-E-A-D-R-A-D-I-O-H-E-A-D-R-A-D-I-O-H-E-A-D-R-A-D-I-O-H-E-A-D
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~Werewolf-Nemesis Jan 29, 2006, 10:59:28 AM
Wow... BDSM all the way, man. Vampires... Great job! good description! Wonderful!

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Life doesn't suck. It's how you live life that sucks.
How you die is decided by Fate, but how you live is decided by you!
I do trades and commissions.
Yes, ok, life does suck... but are you gonna let it suck you down?
Breathe.
~Cly~
:iconpetit-chafleur:
Mood: Aroused ~petit-chafleur Aug 10, 2006, 11:54:46 PM
sseeexy
lucky girl
lol

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lele.
:iconshahath:
~shahath Aug 12, 2006, 9:16:50 PM
If you tied her up (or him), then how can she (or he) scrape your back with his (or her) fingernails? lol You fucked up.
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~SirMaroc Oct 26, 2006, 2:32:58 PM
cool

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loving the writer..
:iconanti-breathing:
~Anti-Breathing Dec 8, 2006, 2:03:13 PM
God damn, I need some of that!
:iconworthlessinsummatt:
~worthlessinsummatt Dec 10, 2006, 10:48:46 AM
inconsitent. first she's tied to the bed then you can feel her nails in you? it doesn't make since. some of the lines towards the end are boring, plain...just not good writing at all. i don't think it's awful. i like parts of it. it just needs some revision. put your passion into! it's just the basic blahblah details. it's too common is most lines, but i think you've got better than that hiding in you.
:iconworthlessinsummatt:
~worthlessinsummatt Dec 10, 2006, 10:48:50 AM
inconsitent. first she's tied to the bed then you can feel her nails in you? it doesn't make since. some of the lines towards the end are boring, plain...just not good writing at all. i don't think it's awful. i like parts of it. it just needs some revision. put your passion into! it's just the basic blahblah details. it's too common is most lines, but i think you've got better than that hiding in you.
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~mushroom-brain Dec 12, 2006, 10:52:13 AM
awsome, i did this with my bf. I'm planning to do the silent grab and remove all our clothes myb without him noticing and have his big hard juicy errection inside of me. :) see im poetic too

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As It Builds Up And Twists, Turns And Burns Inside
How Can I Control These Vicious Thoughts Of Suicide?

*SpAmy*
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